Monday, October 1, 2012

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With my Navajo friend Johnny,
Sitting on a dune of red sand
In Monument Valley, Utah,
And partaking in a little cotraband
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Stan Petrovich
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Elena Sandu 11 October 2012

Amazing write. The imagery is very alive and quite interesting how in such a few words you have connected worlds! Monument Valley, man under wide sky, a sea world (in a tight can, lol that could be the human soul) , and jackrabbit horizon. I cannot believe such beauty to be depressing? Could the friends be disconnected?

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Poetheart Morgan 03 October 2012

I saw the image of the trail in the sky, friends having fun! beautiful

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