Friday, May 30, 2014

Contradiction Comments

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I am a contradiction.
I love.
I hate.
I'm anything but neutral.
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Sana Olivia Hernandez
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Vijay Sai R 19 June 2014

always its tough for us to read ourselves...

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Daniel Brick 01 June 2014

This poem is your personal Declaration of Independence. You are marking off some imaginative space in which you can explore every possible subject you might want to consider writing about in a poem. In a volume of your poems this could be the first one because it introduces YOU and establishes up front one or more of your key themes as a writer. Imagine if you just took 6 of the words describing yourself herein and wrote a poem on each! That would result in a thorough self-portrait - and there would still be more waiting in the poem.

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Susan Lacovara 30 May 2014

Aren't we all contradictions at one time or another? Being able to announce it, through your fine write, is applauded! We, of many facets and faces recognize ourselves herein. PEACE

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Sana Olivia Hernandez

Sana Olivia Hernandez

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