Continuous Burning/The Sun Creates For Me A Shadow To Hide My Shame Comments

another write to where i cant think of anything else to say but 'i <3 it'

You are amazing thats like the 2nd or 3rd that I have rated you and you should definitely become a poet, gods your amazing! ! !

The only pain that lasts forever is the one you inflict apon yourself, not pain that others give you. If you can live with yourself and learn to not hate that person in the mirror, the pain you inflict on yourself can lessen.

So sad but so beautiful

very sad, yet very relateable. itll be ok though. you'll see. everything will be ok. just keep hoping. great job on expressing your feelings though.

Well I smell pain, I have being hurt too...and I am bettingmine was worst and I have being hurt lots of times ok... Your grammar is good...I have poems that will interest you and soften your pain...but friend Broken hearts are broken heart its not the end of life... there was a man with 25 cent in his pocket He said he was going to kill himself, Since he lost his job and his woman.. So he said I will buy a banana and kill myself after eating the banana, An another rush and eat the skin... the man said I will not kill myself again Since there are always ppl in worst situtation than us... Good write