Friday, August 8, 2014

Continuity Has Its Own Strains Comments

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Continuity has its own strains,
A frozen life has so many pains,
Rising early in the morning,
Initially it was charming,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 07 October 2017

A poem of some unique thoughts, a wonderful write.

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Khalid Saifullah 17 February 2017

A frozen life has so many pains, ..................................nice thoughts.

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Bisma Mirza 10 March 2015

A wonderful thinking and a nice poem....................10

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Valsa George 11 August 2014

Yes, we need a change.... either for good or bad! Somehow it has come to such a point of realization that the world cannot continue like this! A powerful write!

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Md Asadullah 10 August 2014

healthy yearning, thanks for sharing :)

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V P Mahur 10 August 2014

Dear Bro, Such a nice poem with lovely imagery. Thanks for your comments on my latest poem. You will be glad to know that two of my poems namely 'Season of Colors' and 'This is My House' have been published By 'Lost Tower Publications' in the book 'Eastern Voices'. Thanks for your great blessings.

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Amitava Sur 10 August 2014

yes very true, some time as a recess the life needs a little break. ie, Off all the norms, the body and mind stay away off the regular practices and thus they relax to take up bigger pressures and responsibilities.

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Salini Nair 09 August 2014

And the peace its worth, Having love as its crown, .................beautiful poem sir...very meaningful in its Context

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