Monday, November 10, 2008

Continuity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ideas and thoughts were all premonitions.
Lingered together with emotion.
Sensitivity full of contradictions.
Losing its path in an intersection.
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Min Sia
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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

One into another means continuation. But everything has its own completion. Rachel Ann Butler

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 06 December 2008

Hello poet friend Min. This is an intriging read and thought provoking as well. I enjoyed, Loyd

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Blue Eyes 16 November 2008

i am really amazed by this poem.there are words that i cannot even spell.i had to use the dictionary to get the meanings of some words however, i loved the poem as soon as i understood it.i think ur english is great and ur poems r even better.

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Tj Becker 16 November 2008

Another excellent write. A style of your own, with flow and imagination

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Homen Thangjam 14 November 2008

Continuity shall define you as the poet to reckon with. A complete poem in terms of thought, ideas and integrity. Power of expression at its creative heights. Great.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 November 2008

wow! thoughtful and ya observation amazing....penned finely! ....10+

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C T Heart 10 November 2008

One's completion of work, flowed with continuity...a10 Mia... Mabuhay! ! !

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