Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, November 5, 2014

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Think not about failure
And make sure
It may not happen again
It shall bring gain
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Widespread corruption and the use of black money Faraz Zafar2 hours ago Not bad actually, it sure does convey the message but, it lacks a rhyme scheme. And you know what a rhyme scheme often does make all the difference. Keep trying and have a nice day :) 5 Nov

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

amazing Anoeska Verdick2 hours ago straight to the point. I like it Comment +1 5 Nov

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Amazing Dushyant Bhola1 hour ago A poem of national interest for every country. Very beautiful theme nicely penned. Comment +1 5 Nov

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Inner struggle Larry W. Morgan2 hours ago The struggle is in the heart of man, Battling free spirit, or the loss there of. The spirit is there for God, there should be no battle. Good Write, it has a spark of eye openers, thanks for sharing. 5 Nov

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2014

Think not about failure And make sure

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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