Tuesday, December 18, 2018

Contentment In Old Age Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was Cloud Realm
my mind entered, effortlessly,
like breathing in pure
mountain air. My wife and I
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 19 December 2018

hey, daniel! you have embodied contentment in this poem. i relate. a portion of proverbs 5 comes to mind, meant to warn men against adultery—why would you trade enduring intimacies for cheap thrills with a? for dalliance with a promiscuous stranger? indeed. one builds a shared life with shared memories and an intimacy which only commitment and years can bring. and what better response than thank you. -glen

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 18 December 2018

An ideal place to live at old age.Fantastic write! 10++++++++++++

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