Wednesday, July 17, 2019

Contentment Comments

Rating: 4.7

If there is contentment
There will be no walls
That divide the rich and the poor.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 01 January 2022

Contentment would guide us to a common end of unity and togetherness like the rivers in the sea is genuine remark.Excellent write Madam.Very bedt wis

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Nabakishore Dash 26 November 2021

fabulous write.

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Nabakishore Dash 21 November 2021

I liked your first two lines as well as the last two lines.Beautiful poem Madam.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 September 2020

contentment in poetry

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 August 2019

Only a great poetess like you, have this in her mind. My hats off for you, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin A poem full of wisdom, it be philosophical, it be metaphorical, but it is true magnificent! A myriad of 10's for this very educative prose poem. Up to MyPoemList (Again? ! Of course, my dear great poetess)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 August 2019

All three stanzas are one by one excellent thoughts presented in this brilliant poem. Fascinating metaphors in all three verses..Contentment is the keyword in all stanzas. This is most beautifully worded in this fantastic write.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 August 2019

Like the flow of water/In the river/Contentment guides us/To a common end of Unity and togetherness.....your expression flows like a river! A sparkling piece of poetry!

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Through the mist of contentment comes paradise to all but is it possible? ......Rose it is brilliantly voiced through a well script......10 +++++++

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Nosheen Irfan 26 July 2019

Oh so deep! Loaded with wisdom. Contentment is our deliverance if only we could find it. Well penned.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 July 2019

A splendid work on contentment! Liked the second stanza most......10

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Kostas Lagos 21 July 2019

Great poem RMJA! Well written

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Contentment is the key to happiness in life. A beautiful comparison with a bird who flies without any kind of desires. The Sages of India and scriptures speak of contentment as a noble virtue. Thank you Rose for sharing such a beautiful thought........10

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 19 July 2019

Wonderful. Contentment is life itself. One earns and do many stuffs to be happy, yet he/she doesn't happy. Contentment belongs creatures better than us. Heart touching piece of poetry. I really loved reading it.

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Anjandev Roy 19 July 2019

Very wisely penned. Thank u. Anjandev Roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 July 2019

It is said that if a man is given all the riches of the world they will still not be enough for him. There is nothing better than contentment if one were to feel happy. A thought-provoking piece.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 July 2019

Like the flow of water! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sing for everyone dear poetess expecting nothing in return. Thank you very much for sharing...10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 July 2019

Simply inspiring, dear ate Rose...10+++++

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Akhtar Jawad 18 July 2019

You are right but contentment stops the way of achieving more and that stops struggle to work more. No doubt in it that a satisfied and content life brings peace of mind.

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Kim Barney 18 July 2019

Sandra Feldman said it all! Her comments are always so full and meaningful. Amen to everything she said!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

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