Friday, December 8, 2017

Contentment Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have been a pool,
A small version of the dream lake
Not once but often
I had cherished.
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Nosheen Irfan 10 December 2017

How beautifully n artistically you depict contentment. Kudos for writing such a deep poem. A huge 10.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 December 2017

Thank you revered poetess for the elegant remarks and these inspiring words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 December 2017

To play here! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 December 2017

Thanks revered Edward Sir for the great remark. Feel obliged to have your attention and gracious evaluation.

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

Still I am happy enough with merriment of the kids, who one day will become lords of their dreams and Gods of their worlds. A great contribution, so nicely crafted. This poem shows your rare poetic abilities. 10++++ Rani

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

Still I am happy enough with merriment of the kids, who one day will become lords of their dreams and Gods of their worlds. A great contribution, so nicely crafted. This poem shows your rare poetic abilities.

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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