I have been a pool,
A small version of the dream lake
Not once but often
I had cherished.
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Thanks revered Edward Sir for the great remark. Feel obliged to have your attention and gracious evaluation.
Still I am happy enough with merriment of the kids, who one day will become lords of their dreams and Gods of their worlds. A great contribution, so nicely crafted. This poem shows your rare poetic abilities. 10++++ Rani
Still I am happy enough with merriment of the kids, who one day will become lords of their dreams and Gods of their worlds. A great contribution, so nicely crafted. This poem shows your rare poetic abilities.
How beautifully n artistically you depict contentment. Kudos for writing such a deep poem. A huge 10.
Thank you revered poetess for the elegant remarks and these inspiring words.