Contentment Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Contentment

Rating: 5.0


I have been a pool,
A small version of the dream lake
Not once but often
I had cherished.

I have lilies
floating on my breast
with dreams flooded,

Instead of fishing boats or
ships with tons
of wealth loaded.

I don't have fans
nor tourist troops to roam,
But kids many, to play here
with soaps and foam.

Still I am happy enough
with merriment of the kids,
who one day will become
lords of their dreams and
Gods of their worlds.

Friday, December 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: content,dream,happiness,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 10 December 2017

How beautifully n artistically you depict contentment. Kudos for writing such a deep poem. A huge 10.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 December 2017

Thank you revered poetess for the elegant remarks and these inspiring words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 December 2017

To play here! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 December 2017

Thanks revered Edward Sir for the great remark. Feel obliged to have your attention and gracious evaluation.

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

Still I am happy enough with merriment of the kids, who one day will become lords of their dreams and Gods of their worlds. A great contribution, so nicely crafted. This poem shows your rare poetic abilities. 10++++ Rani

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

Still I am happy enough with merriment of the kids, who one day will become lords of their dreams and Gods of their worlds. A great contribution, so nicely crafted. This poem shows your rare poetic abilities.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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