Contented Souls Comments

I just had to read this again. Beautiful. The first line defines the reason for life.

The souls are like an archipelago of life matters...it can expand and shrink..it like a gas can be in compact or lease..the passionate of souls in thought, togetherness, love, feelings, sad, emotion, mind will growing the collective souls to bombard in the space of heart...like you have written there, sincere and heartfelt...and like a birth of a star it will charms universe with the light it produced..same as soul, it can bring emotion higher and smiles if the souls chained in correct way...you write so cool, inspiring too.._Unwritten Soul

Lovely poem- has a warmth to it and is very beautifully written - Great work!

I thoroughly enjoy the 'feel' of this poem; very well done Cosmic.

Very nice and uplifting poem. Keep it up, Cosmic dreamer