Sun hangs
at the eaves
of the horizon,
sky beams
...
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Oh, Thank you Unnikrishnan for helping my comment to go through! .. This poem holds ever such beauty and heart it was important to me to leave a kind comment! ..
This is ever so beautifully beautifully painted! .. And leaves the reader with such feelings of hope and awe! ... Beyond #'S! ..++++++++++++++++++
Rebecca Navarre tells me that she was not allowed by PoemHunter to post her comments here. I don't know why. Can anyone help, please?
Thank You, Richard and Rose Marie for responding to the idea of the poem, with this great enthusiasm. Obliged to you.
A beautiful poem with compelling images. I can see the sky beams in marvelous colors. Top marks! !
I am ever so grateful to Becca for coming back to share her views on the poem.