Sun hangs
at the eaves
of the horizon,
sky beams
in all seven colours…
Thank You, Richard and Rose Marie for responding to the idea of the poem, with this great enthusiasm. Obliged to you.
I am ever so grateful to Becca for coming back to share her views on the poem.
Oh, Thank you Unnikrishnan for helping my comment to go through! .. This poem holds ever such beauty and heart it was important to me to leave a kind comment! ..
This is ever so beautifully beautifully painted! .. And leaves the reader with such feelings of hope and awe! ... Beyond #'S! ..++++++++++++++++++
Rebecca Navarre tells me that she was not allowed by PoemHunter to post her comments here. I don't know why. Can anyone help, please?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful poem with compelling images. I can see the sky beams in marvelous colors. Top marks! !