Thursday, July 5, 2007

Contemplation Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you sit in the dark
And contemplate your death
You ask yourself, “Why? ”
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Tobias Gray
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Anabel just Anabel 08 October 2009

mmm it's true if you think about it! nice job! : D

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Young One 17 September 2009

you sound like a Sparton king, this is true though, the weak do get in the way, but if it were not for the weak, the strong could not exist.

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Tamara - Hanaring 17 September 2009

a beautiful question and answer..well said

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Serenity Prayer 25 June 2008

never thought of it that way before...hm.....interesting. good job. very well written.

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Aaron Tate 22 April 2008

Without the weak non could be considered strong.

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Evaughn Gray 02 August 2007

this is a very good poem...i really liked this one, i give it a ten ~hazel

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Tobias Gray

Tobias Gray

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