Tuesday, July 10, 2007

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Rating: 4.9

Called to see if you where home
Only wish you had been
Needed to talk with you
Trust you are well
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Alison Smith
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Ivan Donn Carswell 18 July 2007

This is the brevity of word style which I thought Yoonoos Peerbocus has patented for himself! You have done a very credible job here Alison - lookout Yoonoos... Rgds, Ivan

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Alison Cassidy 11 July 2007

Wow! This is great. Almost like a text message - only more so. Poetry that says so much in so few words. The sort that I really love. Great piece. love, Allie xxxx

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Marvin Brato 10 July 2007

Caring for someone is to see that person safe at home per se! . I can relate to it.

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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