Thursday, September 11, 2008

Consumption Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is this I see,
This white void,
Trying to consume me,
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Jhanus Thanatos
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Tj Becker 17 September 2008

I keep messing this up haha Not sure what I'm doing. Just wanted you to know this is a great poem and the below is a powerful stanza that I can relate to: Consuming my brain, Enducing my pain, I've gone completly insane, This denied sanity I must regain, -- really well done. and if this is a duplicate just delet me haha..I have no clue how I keep messing up.

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