Tuesday, July 1, 2008

Consumption Comments

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I am drunk
Liquid poison
Pushing my blood away
As if it was a rising sun
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Tai Chi Italy 01 July 2008

Sometimes consuming in not a bad thing Cokbod my friend, we have all been here and you describe it's place of desperate lonliness vividly, we consume, get full, get empty and hopefully a new day gets us filled more positive energy....that's how the writer gets by....but only sometimes. smiling at you Tai

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Allan James Saywell 01 July 2008

Years ago i intoxicated a Crab with liberal amounts of whiskey and your poem vividly describes the crabs behavior, he didnt move much either and when he did he only went sideways AP

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