Saturday, March 24, 2018

Consumption Comments

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Life consumes me
not like it used to
a great damask is spread
life-table and a bed
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2018

You are definitely grateful for every flow and poetic expression. Special dinner served for life is peace and in every fall we can eat peace to stand tall with ease royally. Gratitude is in glee. We are thankful to God. This poem carries special poetic expression and revisiting this poem values more. Beautiful stanzas already I have quoted in previous comment...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2018

my consumption ablaze my taste buried my hunger flurried but i never worried just like it does now i am grateful for every flow what i may consume of life or life consumes me thankful for any strife and gratitude in glee to only Thee............fantastic expression with nice theme. Beautiful philosophical poem shared amazingly. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 March 2018

royal or not, i do not care anyway, life consumes me, it sounds rare.....it does not worry me. i have peace in me. thankful for any strife and gratitude in glee. a beautiful poem on peace and satifsfaction...... content with everything...... thalnk u dear poetess for ur greatness. tony

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