Monday, December 29, 2008

Consumed Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look in my own eyes,
What do I see?
A person I don’t know staring back at me.
What have I become?
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Amy Fifita
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Lynda Robson 15 January 2009

You write so maturely, this poem is how we all feel at times, I think we should all just be true to ourselves, 10 Lynda

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Aijaz Asif 14 January 2009

another marvellous write ma'am, its almost kind of easy to write on ther things but it's very difficult to write on yourself and i'm amazed how you pianted a selfportrait with extremely strong and powerful words...while reading it i felt as if i'm reading myself, bravo, bravo...even tho it almost looks like one of my own poem 'Stranger'....thanks 100+++++ and AA++++ for this master piece and added to my favs... rgds asif

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Amy Fifita

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