Sunday, September 10, 2006

Consume Me Comments

Rating: 3.1

Consume me in the burning dance of flesh
And feed from my heart with lavish exuberance
While I surrender to the anticipation of rapture
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A.J. McKinley
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Ana Monnar 18 April 2009

Beautifully said with a lot of passion. Excellent! ! !

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Lylyanna Pilewski 17 September 2006

compemtoary i like it great write! Lylyanna

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Esther Leclerc 10 September 2006

Besides getting me right in the meaning, this beautiful poem is one of the best free verse pieces I've ever read. This deserves many future reads. Thank you for this, Esther

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A.J. McKinley

A.J. McKinley

Indiana, United States
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