Consternation In The Constellations Comments

Its said that - 'Miracles occur naturally as expressions of love. The real miracle is the love that inspires them. In this sense everything that comes from love is a miracle.” The expression of love is superb The pain of love moving away is a disturb. Nice one. Touched by the sentiment.

Breathtakingly beautiful... love it. Poignant with sublime imagery. I especially like the line about turning the world counter-clockwise, how many of us have wished this almost? HG: -) xx

First of all, i love the title...then to make it even better, you add great imagery, and deep sadness. Excellent poem, check out mine if ya get a chance

'The stars blink out by billions The tears that are gathered in the galaxy.' ................... Rani, It is pleasant to read this fine to a poem. Thank you, Tsira

Right from the rhyming title to the last word of your verse, it's indeed a beautiful journey, encompassing the silent day, dumb night, blinking stars and the vastest galaxy. The flow is smooth and I envy your style.

Yes the ending adds to the poem a nice finnish Rani your work is a joy to read Chris x

I am sure the stars have written much for you and time will the stars unfold thoughtful write 10 Chris x