Starry night like this
Always took her breath away
She would be so speechless
Innocent and full of play
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There is sadness in this poem, and a pain that is hinted at: death. But well expressed.
This is a beautiful piece to read. I dare say it has some poetic quality. A statement I rarely use in reference to this style. This is good stuff and I would recommend it to any reader. GW62
the brilliance of the constellations are shining on this very poem! brilliant!