Saturday, October 6, 2007

Constellation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Starry night like this
Always took her breath away
She would be so speechless
Innocent and full of play
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Timothy Lee Hollandsworth Jr.
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

the brilliance of the constellations are shining on this very poem! brilliant!

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Rani Turton 16 June 2008

There is sadness in this poem, and a pain that is hinted at: death. But well expressed.

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Greenwolfe 1962 25 March 2008

This is a beautiful piece to read. I dare say it has some poetic quality. A statement I rarely use in reference to this style. This is good stuff and I would recommend it to any reader. GW62

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