Monday, May 15, 2017

Constant Remembrance Comments

Rating: 4.3

There are no fine goodbyes,
Just remembrance, pain and sighs,
Times that were and shall not be,
With all love gone, how free are we?
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Sandra Feldman
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Theodora Onken 16 May 2017

Your words ring ever so true dear Sandra; When those we love are taken - there is no more but the memories - so long the emptiness fills us - as we try to move on with our lives...finding it nearly impossible - eventually we move on but always with a certain part of our heart gone. Your writing is stellar here! You have managed to touch the very core of absolute sorrow! Bravo, dear poet, bravo!

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 May 2017

Really impressive one. Thanks

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Buried Alive 15 May 2017

Prisoners of memory, that still live in my mind I feel the pain, the sighs as you feel in every line, of love that cant come back I know what that is like, a constant remembrance I won't forget .....after reading this. 10++++++++++++

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