Saturday, December 6, 2014

Constant Motion Comments

Rating: 4.8

Another night in the
galaxy of space

swirling round and round
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Heather Burns
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Khairul Ahsan 03 July 2017

Loved the idea- our life is like a merry go round, we dono know when and where to stop and get down. Loved Soulful Heart's comment: 'every thing from an atom to a biggest galaxy is in motion...............swirling, twirling, bonding, pairing, cleaving.................universe is motion'.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2015

Another night with the ways of life. Nice work.

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Soulful Heart 19 January 2015

every thing from an atom to a biggest galaxy is in motion...............swirling, twirling, bonding, pairing, cleaving.................universe is motion

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 January 2015

Beautiful poem Heather. Life is a merry go round, unsure of whether one will be able to get out of the thoughts itself, which keep us held in constant motion. This poem can be read in many ways. Loved reading it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 January 2015

Beautiful poem Heather. Life is a merry go round, unsure of whether one will be able to get out of the thoughts itself, which keep us held in constant motion. This poem can be read in many ways. Loved reading it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 January 2015

Beautiful poem Heather. Life is a merry go round, unsure of whether one will be able to get out of the thoughts itself, which keep us held in constant motion. This poem can be read in many ways. Loved reading it.

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Mj Lemon 25 December 2014

Constant mo... A wonderful and all too true reminder of just how fast things can change, stop, turn... Beautiful poem.

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Amitava Sur 18 December 2014

Very creatively written about the continuance of the monotony of life.... very nice.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 17 December 2014

The poem has its own life message, , motivational aspects and thankfulness for the day that going to night and I think it has some spiritual thoughts also. Very love poem I feel.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 December 2014

Very lovely poem and how nice it is- swirling round and round like a merry-go-round like a movie is being watched thank you

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The reality of life with its hectic flow is here creatively composed!

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Cadance Cunningham 13 December 2014

I always enjoy simple poems. the most is said with few words

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 13 December 2014

Contestant motion is the shining effort of life. Wonderful poem.

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Paul Brookes 10 December 2014

Loved this simple poem which made me think sometimes we all want to get off Thanks for sharing BB

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2014

I am spinning from the constant motion makes its well realized and presented poem so far. Beautiful.

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Hazel Durham 10 December 2014

Beautiful write were all in constant motion sometimes it would be nice to step away!

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Hazel Durham 10 December 2014

Beautiful write were all in constant motion sometimes it would be nice to step away!

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 10 December 2014

The world and its things and also the universe all are in motion a nice idea and scientific truth and poem is great.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 10 December 2014

The world and its things and also the universe all are in motion a nice idea and scientific truth and poem is great.

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Salini Nair 09 December 2014

nice poem...like it..allow me to get off I am spinning from the constant mo

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