Friday, August 7, 2009
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Rating: ★4.3
You speak to the brides
through the cold thin air
of treason,
betraying them by your
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Mystic Indian
07 August 2009
very different way with words, words used like oxymorons- virginal evasiveness, especially the ending - feeling so complete-was an interesting twist, sharp contrasts and deep. without the reference to 'white' woman alone you can make it 'universal' 9/10
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7/20/2025 9:51:09 PM # 1.0.0
the heart will add to the pen.... beautifully sad