Sunday, March 8, 2009

Constant Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Glory was once.
The Power was twice.
Yet as time goes on,
Sadness remains.
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The Grandmother is Watching
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A well penned piece, illustrating the insatisfaction and bitterness of the higher powers. A great write, keep them coming!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 March 2009

The resultant is sadness, constant sadness. Nice meaningful poem.

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