Thursday, December 4, 2008

# Conspicuous By Its Absence Comments

Rating: 2.8

While tending to the garden one balmy November,
Helping my mother wash the leaves of the dust,
And gently cut off the dead branches and flowers,
Spraying the ones still seeming bright and robust…
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Raj Nandy 27 July 2009

I had read this poem earlier and I feel very happy and delighted to read it all over again! Because each time I see a good painting or read a poem, I discover something NEW all over again! We have heard of Grandmother's recipe, here comes a Mother's Philosophy of Life itself - in the wisdom of those last two lines! 10++++ -Raj Nandy

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 December 2008

Very true Mamta, plants and relationships always need love and nurture and no doubt, they have uncertain future. A very fine touch of sensibility is the theme of this poem.

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Vidi Writes 13 December 2008

‘Relation Upholding’ and ‘Plant Breeding’ Hum… wonderful comparison I enjoyed the essence of it. As sweet pea grows with support Relation thrives with rapport Still… There are plants those support themselves. But… Are there relations which stand by themselves? ! Also its a truth.. The seed of Sweet pea is poisonous But it has vibrant colour Sweet fragrance... Just to take care that The seeds are not eaten. There are relations with such seeds But how much care do we take To discard those seeds...! ! ! Thank you. Very Good one.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 December 2008

Stunning imagery. Beautiful poem 'guldastha'

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Anjali Sinha 10 December 2008

very true plants or humans all need love and nurturing a lovely write Mamta surely a 10++++ regards anjali

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 December 2008

A virtue of absence is not an evidence of love prevalence....but a reality of unfulfil love.Excellent rhyming Mamta!

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Raj Nandy 05 December 2008

What a beautiful comparison between the two! A good philosophical ending in verse, - thank you! 10! - Raj Nandy

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Chitra - 05 December 2008

wonderful imagery with a strong message! drives home the point in an absolute crisp and profound manner

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