Monday, August 31, 2015

- Consonance Comments

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Beclogged his mind attempted to
assemble words and make them rhyme
two chicks inside his dancing shoe
arpeggios sang about lunchtime.
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Georgios Venetopoulos
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Chinedu Dike 28 September 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing, Georgios.

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 10 November 2017

ΕΞΑΙΡΕΤΙΚΟ ΠΟΙΗΜΑ 10+

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Sofia Kioroglou 16 September 2015

I am stunned and speechless! Great poetry! Well-penned and beautiful.

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Georgios Venetopoulos 17 September 2015

Thank you so much, Sofia! Glad to meet you! | :)

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Kelly Kurt 02 September 2015

A very well penned poem, Giorgio!

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Thank you, K.K.!

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Liza Sudina 31 August 2015

Very musical! Bright! rich vocabulary! articulate rhythm! like it!

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Thank you, Liza!

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Georgios Venetopoulos

Georgios Venetopoulos

Athens, Greece
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