Friday, December 6, 2013

Consolation From A Stranger Comments

Rating: 5.0

Queuing at a market stall
One November day;
Pound coin sitting in my hand,
All ready to pay.
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Susy Evelyne
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Every poet writes the creation of poem from the inborn memories and events in life which one cannot miss at all. Here a loss of coin is described by the poet and I felt it very nice and good.

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Valerie Dohren 04 January 2014

I wonder, did Father Christmas bring you another Susy? Amusing write, enjoyed reading.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 December 2013

lovely and inspiring, in the true spirit of the season! great write, Susy.

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 07 December 2013

A story well penned in verse. Enjoyed it!

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John Brown 06 December 2013

Brilliant. It made me laugh out loud. Beware the mighty Cabbage Crate eh? I know a few people who would have upended the thing for a pound! !

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Susy Evelyne

Susy Evelyne

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