Sunday, October 17, 2010

Consolation Comments

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One day I was riding a horse.
I saw the fog, my horse get jumped,
And my heart get cramped.
My eyes were closed,
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Mohammad Tauheed hussain
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Dave Walker 22 December 2011

Like this a great poem, a good write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, For Paul Blackburn.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 November 2010

Good poem. Just keep on writing to gain more experience.

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