Consequences And Repercautions Comments

I'm at work, Breeze Breeze, so won't be able to give a thorough appraisal of your poetry. I read through Repercautions (liked the intended pun) and will comment on it later. Then, when I have more time, I'll read on. So far, I like what I saw.

The ending is insightful. I like the repacautions. A lot of good advice.

good advice........keep writing...you will get better

'but how do you know your mate if you dont have a soul '....... you reeled me in with that line alone....am very much enjoying your work

Very interesting there are couple of lines bit too long try to shorten them up.