Consequences Comments

This is a morbid little thing with cold, cold imagery. Get out of that cold dark room, Kaitlyn! Run ;)

That is how it is supposed to be...

hmmm....Kaitlynn.....this is not one of your best poems. It doesn't really flow together. Try having things in chronic (vocab word! ! !) order. I like the morbidness of the poem....so dark, so deep. Makes me wonder what you were thinking ^.^