Conscripted Angels Comments

An excellent poem......................

' 'An angel never wriggles, sulks or talks, ' / The small boys' harassed teacher told her class; / Then marked out on the floor with coloured chalks / Where each of them should stand. 'Nor does he pass...' lovely lyrics with rhythm to go with the rhyming.

Even the attractive title grabs the attention in this delightful piece. First class writing Mary.

Superb, Mary - been there, seen it... love the detail of the hamster! ! ! Many thanks, WBB

This was a real treat. -shannon

Great Description, and Methphoric Style

sit upon. The shepherds had their sheep; The kings had cardboard crowns and gifts to bring; And even Joseph had his wife to keep Him occupied and stop him fidgeting. the really to remm on our mind to sunken old story of litttle star of christ, it may bring into a verse or curse