Consciousness Kite Comments

dear bullion, our lives are like kites, controlling our destiny.fantastic write.loved each line.i have a similar one.....kites in the hands of destiny.....written for mytwo children.best wishes.

I love this poem.very deep yet very tender in its own beautiful verses

isosceles? Had to look it up.... equal sides, equal angles... I've learned something today.. 'Can my kite fly me? Is it something it can do? Has it in this short verse flown you? ' When I was a boy I used to send messages up to my kite... On paper with a slit to the centre, the wind would carry it up... I always thought then, in my innocence, it was a note to God... Colin J...10...