Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Consciousness Comments

Rating: 3.5

I have yet to find
A substance substantial enough
For me to submerge in,
Like a subdued submarine, I
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Steven Aragon
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Penney Cooper 04 November 2009

you're digging deep here. i love it and of course i can identify!

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Lewis Neil Is Awsome 04 November 2009

Wow, that was pretty good, but i hear there is this poem called 'Neil is awsome', it was life changing and insperational. Read it and vote it a 10!

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Steven Aragon

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