Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Conscious Comments

Rating: 5.0

Of man's first disobedience
that brought us, in being
a mind thats conscious
that kept, seeking.
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Alex David
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Sara Tehrani 10 June 2009

Such a powerfully written poem about the conscious mind, where you've shared ideas that ive never realised or thought about! a really passionate and well written poem. lovely read :)

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