Conscience Comments

Wonderful write...as usual.....

How do I quench the overdue thirst of mine? Appreciated the fathomless depth of this line! A brilliant poem.5 stars!

" How do I quench the overdue thirst of mine With peers drinking leisurely to my scorn" Great line. Great write my friend!

Conscience, the most important part in us, one of your best poems, Kingsley! I have enjoyed this remarkable poem very much.. Thank you for sharing. A 10 Full Score and much much more! God's Great Blessings for you and your family.

Truth is far away from us and it's very difficult to find it out. A nice metaphor.

A true challenge displayed in this symbolic poem of conscience.

The waters around me are shallow with debris Unappealing to my taste.. wonderful and poetic dear poet. tony

Very nice write kingsley.I like it.

Wow, a wonderful poem...simply beautiful. Thanks for sharing dear poet.

Wow, I enjoy the depth of this poem. Quite often our calling is not easy, far and a bit scary to achieve. Let us all keep encouraging our youth, to take the longing to the deep and blue serious, to listen that small voice inside and make the giant leap across the waters around us, to drink from the pureness our heart and soul longs for.

How do I quench the overdue thirst of mine With peers drinking leisurely to my scorn/// beautiful writing on conscience

The waters round me/are shallow with debris/Unappealing to my taste....brilliantly expressed! A beautiful poem....10

A poignant rendition well conceived and nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

How do I quench the overdue thirst of mine With peers drinking leisurely to my scorn. very good poem the struggles and the quest of the conscience. lovely. tony