Monday, September 22, 2008

Conscience Comments

Rating: 3.7

Fine. Ok. Let's stop. Let's seize it.
Let us walk against the wind.
'Life is good now.' Really? Is it?
I can see that you have grinned.
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Ayla Tulip
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'Fine. Ok' dear poet Ayla Tulip. I give you 9+ to start with. The theme was very difficult to compose a poem. But you did it! 'Conscience speaks a lot of humour' indeed, and confuses us all. But the poet knows and 'Laugh at it'. This I like.

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