Friday, May 2, 2008

Conscience Comments

Rating: 3.5

Night

The sky caves in.
Pressure from above,
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Julie Neises
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Stone Granite 20 May 2008

What a great piece. Reconcile the guilt you speak of and move past the guilt inducing memory that visits you on those nights. Release it.

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Kye Kurion 02 May 2008

You brought good emotion, I think you did well.

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