Monday, May 26, 2014

Conscience Comments

Rating: 4.1

Conscience, don't abandon me,
Through my journey, on this day,
Keep supporting, as you're always,
On the wisdom, of my say.
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Zoila T. Flores
COMMENTS
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 11 July 2017

Wonderful thoughts, indeed. Conscience is the compass for the life's journey. One may take every step in accordance with the compass and end up in success. Another may take denial steps to end up in devastation. Choice is always within oneself. Real eye opener to every non-conscientious person. Thanks for the gem of a poem. Congrats for being the member's PoD.X

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2017

Congratulations! Yes, you are right. Conscience never abandons inner strength rather this helps to show light in journey of life. In the passage definitely conscience will assist you. This will give cheerful essence to life. An excellent poem very well crafted is shared here.....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 July 2017

Don't abandon me! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Seamus O Brian 10 July 2017

A finely crafted piece that hums along in a fine cadence with rhyming that enhances your theme. I enjoy how you disarticulate common expressions to retain a freshness, a series of unexpected linguistic detours whose dysrhythmic jolts contrast superbly with the meter and rhyme to keep the reader engaged. Bravo, and congratulations on POD.

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Tom Allport 10 July 2017

a poem of understanding the need to listen to the inner goodness that resides in all of us sometimes? .........well written.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 July 2017

An unique and meaningful soliloquy that is thought provoking too. Heartiest congratulations on it's poem of the Day.

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Richard Wlodarski 10 July 2017

A truly heart-felt and most fitting tribute to all Veterans. If not for them, we wouldn't be here today. Great write! Congratulations on Poem Of The Day. You might enjoy my poem Moral Responsibility. It's appealing to Drake's conscience!

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Rajnish Manga 10 July 2017

The poem is a treat to those who would like to probe life from a philosophical point of view. The equation of conscience, soul and spirit has also been taken into account while talking of life. Thanks.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 July 2017

Conscience is a good adviser of the heart and mind in order for life not to go astray....... Rated 10++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, BATHE YOUR HEART, and TAKE TIME TO THINK...Thanks, Zoila. By the way, my middle name is also Flores👍👍👍

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Michael Walker 10 July 2016

Very well thought out, and conscience is so important in day-to-day life.

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Susan Williams 10 July 2016

Very nicely and sincerely written. I'm glad you shared this with us. It may be that this stage in history requires more and more of us to turn back to listening to our conscience.

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Clarence Prince 10 July 2016

Nice work, Zoila, well done!

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Jasbir Chatterjee 10 July 2016

Conscience is always our best friend and guide. If you listen to conscience, you will never go wrong. It remains our only companion when everyone forsakes. Congrats on being poet of the day!

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Paul Amrod 10 July 2016

Hi Zoila, A very moving poem with an interaction between the need and the bother of conscience. Nonetheless your deep respect for your inner voice comes through with the ingenuity of the flow of your text. Thanks for sharing, Paul

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 July 2016

Through my journey! ! With my hope along the way. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 May 2016

Conscience, please forgive me, To my morning, if you may, If my eyes, refuse to open, It's my soul, that's in dismay...... conscience that does not abandon me, conscience gives me strength. conscience leads me to a spiritual life....... a meditation on conscience. liked it very much. than ky ou. tony

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Allotey Abossey 04 June 2015

We rule our world with the conscience: our decisions, actions are controlled by the conscience. God bless you

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Chinedu Dike 13 May 2015

A good conscience is a continued celebration, its visits are like that of a mother-in-law whose visits never ends. It's a lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Susmit Panda 11 July 2014

Seriously, a great work, Zoila! ! ! Do read my verses, yeah......

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