If you are broken
you're broken.
then your love is crushed
and soul is fragmented
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word of unity- wait for the wind of love reunite your fragmented soul! great writings+++++++++10
A beautiful poem with a message for tormented souls not to get lost in the darkness of misery.
Lovely poem. Waves of sorrow need to be tranquiliz before the winds of love take your soul in its arms. This is your first poem that have read. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful philosophical poem bristling with wisdom. A powerful message, well texted and nicely drafted. Thanks for sharing Arun.
First- make a sea out of your tears and float your fragmented soul. And then- wait for the wind of love reunite your fragmented soul! - - Very nicely done.We must realise that we are never alone.If there are people to hurt us, there are also people who love us.
Diversion towards the peace Should be learnt from sorrow, Nice poem sir.
Arun! your poem is both very sweet and cute. This is exactly what i shall do when i feel sad and lost. First- make a sea out of your tears and float your fragmented soul. And then- wait for the wind of love reunite your fragmented soul! Beautiful poem. Full Marks!
Float your fragmented soul. That line alone deserves Poem Of The Day. Congratulations, Arun!
Waiting for wind of love revives trust of humanity and sorrow goes far. This is an interesting poem very well penned and shared. Congratulation! Your poem is nicely selected for the poem of the day...10
Life is full of ups and downs but we must keep our spirits high and show our resilience when down. If you're broken / you're broken! Don't even worry / who did it to you! And then- wait for the wind of love
a wise worded poem just waiting to set sail again? .............well penned.
Short and to the point. A very positive write.One should not lose heart even in worst days. Thanks for sharing and congrats.
arun, i like the brevity of this poem and the way you've shaped it. but most of all i'm drawn to its channeling of wisdom- its frank recognition of pain, the need to grieve then wait, and the knowing love yet inhabits the world and breeze into our lives. -gk
Very nice.. and Peaceful encouraging Lines.! ~ and nicely Philosophical! ! thanks for sharing Poet! ! 10++!
Nice poem, who's too blame but life and love