Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Conquest Of The Sorrow Comments

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If you are broken
you're broken.
then your love is crushed
and soul is fragmented
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Arun Maji
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Keith Brown 22 April 2020

Nice poem, who's too blame but life and love

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Akhtar Jawad 24 February 2020

A lovely thought so nicely presented in a a lovely poem.

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you are 03 June 2019

A popularity cheat//no goodwill come of it

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Britte Ninad 17 May 2018

word of unity- wait for the wind of love reunite your fragmented soul! great writings+++++++++10

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Chandra Sekhar Batabyal 12 February 2018

A beautiful poem with a message for tormented souls not to get lost in the darkness of misery.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 January 2018

Great message in a great poem.

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Savita Tyagi 09 December 2017

Lovely poem. Waves of sorrow need to be tranquiliz before the winds of love take your soul in its arms. This is your first poem that have read. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 17 October 2017

Beautiful philosophical poem bristling with wisdom. A powerful message, well texted and nicely drafted. Thanks for sharing Arun.

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Lyn Paul 03 October 2017

Beautifully written. There is hope that time will heal.

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Bharati Nayak 23 June 2017

First- make a sea out of your tears and float your fragmented soul. And then- wait for the wind of love reunite your fragmented soul! - - Very nicely done.We must realise that we are never alone.If there are people to hurt us, there are also people who love us.

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Diversion towards the peace Should be learnt from sorrow, Nice poem sir.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 April 2017

Simply superb anecdote. Congrats on it's poem of the Day.

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Arun Maji 01 May 2017

thank you. you are kind.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 26 April 2017

Arun! your poem is both very sweet and cute. This is exactly what i shall do when i feel sad and lost. First- make a sea out of your tears and float your fragmented soul. And then- wait for the wind of love reunite your fragmented soul! Beautiful poem. Full Marks!

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Arun Maji 01 May 2017

you are generous. regards

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Richard Wlodarski 26 April 2017

Float your fragmented soul. That line alone deserves Poem Of The Day. Congratulations, Arun!

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Arun Maji 01 May 2017

thank you for your generosity. regards

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 26 April 2017

Waiting for wind of love revives trust of humanity and sorrow goes far. This is an interesting poem very well penned and shared. Congratulation! Your poem is nicely selected for the poem of the day...10

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Arun Maji 01 May 2017

thank you for kind support.

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Rajnish Manga 26 April 2017

Life is full of ups and downs but we must keep our spirits high and show our resilience when down. If you're broken / you're broken! Don't even worry / who did it to you! And then- wait for the wind of love

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Tom Allport 26 April 2017

a wise worded poem just waiting to set sail again? .............well penned.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 April 2017

Short and to the point. A very positive write.One should not lose heart even in worst days. Thanks for sharing and congrats.

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Glen Kappy 26 April 2017

arun, i like the brevity of this poem and the way you've shaped it. but most of all i'm drawn to its channeling of wisdom- its frank recognition of pain, the need to grieve then wait, and the knowing love yet inhabits the world and breeze into our lives. -gk

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Siddartha Montik 26 April 2017

Very nice.. and Peaceful encouraging Lines.! ~ and nicely Philosophical! ! thanks for sharing Poet! ! 10++!

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