Sunday, September 27, 2015

Conqueror Of The Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

Which road should I take where you're not there
You whose name is on all distances...
Oh tired conqueror of the light
Whose body is still left there
...
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Afrooz Jafarinoor
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Roseann Shawiak 07 October 2015

An extremely insightful poem, beautifully written - it grasps the heart and touches the mind with a tenderly gentle force. Your words together do this to the reader! It is totally amazing, Afrooz! I love this poem! Add to my favorites. Give you a 10, wish it could be more. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 08 October 2015

Dear RoseAnn, to receive so much enthusiasm from a 6 poet could be considered a conquest by itself! Thank you!

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Elena Sandu 01 October 2015

Beautiful! Could wondering spirits ever find what they are looking for? Or were they meant to never stop but search through one life after another? Is there forever a forced hold on when found the things we're looking for? Your poem to my soul brings the amazing insight, sort of awareness of my constant needs. Brilliant pen thank you for sharing!

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 02 October 2015

Thank you dear Elena! Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder!

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