Saturday, April 11, 2009

Conquering Paradise Comments

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I want you
To feel

The power of my sword unsheathed -
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Iohannes Silvaticus
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 19 April 2009

u are absolutely right.. u are truly a remarkable poet

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 16 April 2009

Paradise cannot be conquered by sword. A nice poem filled with intense passion, as Chitra said.

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Chitra - 16 April 2009

an amazing write..an emotional war filled with intense passion

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Moffat Mbuzi 16 April 2009

Owesome poem. Its a great one

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