A big black stone
Was thrown
Into our home
It perched in our minds
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we poured all our energy-----strongest rock.A very inspiring write for all Madam Rose.I love the stanza, very didactic.
Today, the sun shines. It will shine forever. Thank u. anjandev roy.
The way the poem conveys fear symbolically through the black stone makes the piece beautiful. Fear feeds on itself, but it can't be removed or cut apart. It has to be conquered.
Fear - a conglomeration of sinister shadows without substance, is aptly portrayed in a brilliant poem written with spiritual insight. Beautiful indeed. Thanks for sharing, Rose. Remain blessed.
To conquer fear is to truly become liberated. It is fear that most often chains the heart and soul. Thank you for this insightful, very brilliantly penned write.
It melted the black stone Even its black shadow..Very fine poem and it culminates in removing all that is black.. fear. very positive.. tony
Our family is frozen Like the black stone But we clung to heavens above And called all its angels To lift the burden That threatened The sanctity of our home.......well penned with great ideology. Thanks for sharing.
This is my favorite poem! My great pleasure reading this magnificent piece of work time and again!
Today, the sun shines In its brightest And warmest It melted the black stone Even its black shadow..........at the end the fear is vanished. A beautiful poem so nicely executed for which I made second visit.
Today, the sun shines In its brightest And warmest It melted the black stone Even its black shadow. A wonderful positive end of the poem.. thank u dear poetess. tony
A highly imaginative poem on fear having touching expression. I find here the positivity. Nice work.
I absolutely agree with my friend Robert! It's a beautiful poem! My pleasure reading it time and again!
That is very true, Robert. Thank you for your great comment.
A piece of work that echoes a lot of optimistic spirit! I find a great confidence when read these kind of poems! A beautiful piece of work Rose! I take immense pleasure in visiting this poem!
With a gun of self confidence, Rose Marie Juan Austin conquers the dark land of fears Look at her she is smiling, she puts the lights on, in her eyes I do not see tears.
A very heartwarming and highly motivational comment, Akhtar. Loved it.
Our family is frozen/Like the black stone/But we clung to heavens above..very optimistic expression! I find a great skill in you in poetry writing! As a fan, I find pleasure reading your poems very often! God ahead writing beautiful poems! Stay always blessed!
Thank you, Dr. Dillip.I feel honored and humbled by your wonderful message.
The compactness of this beautiful poem inspires me a lot! .....We poured all our energy/Solidified our courage The conglomeration of/Family's strength/Produced the hardest/And strongest rock.............well penned Rose.........(10)
This comment meant a lot to me, Dr. Dillip.Very much appreciated.
To lift the burden! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you for your time in reading the poem. Your comment is much appreciated.
Unity is stremgth.very didactic really Madam Rose.