Tuesday, December 5, 2017

Conquer Fear Comments

Rating: 5.0

A big black stone
Was thrown
Into our home
It perched in our minds
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 01 June 2022

Unity is stremgth.very didactic really Madam Rose.

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Nabakishore Dash 20 May 2022

we poured all our energy-----strongest rock.A very inspiring write for all Madam Rose.I love the stanza, very didactic.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 September 2020

Focus the rays, ignite your poetic fire

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Anjandev Roy 18 September 2019

Today, the sun shines. It will shine forever. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 June 2019

The way the poem conveys fear symbolically through the black stone makes the piece beautiful. Fear feeds on itself, but it can't be removed or cut apart. It has to be conquered.

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Chinedu Dike 23 April 2019

Fear - a conglomeration of sinister shadows without substance, is aptly portrayed in a brilliant poem written with spiritual insight. Beautiful indeed. Thanks for sharing, Rose. Remain blessed.

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Chris Embrick 08 March 2019

To conquer fear is to truly become liberated. It is fear that most often chains the heart and soul. Thank you for this insightful, very brilliantly penned write.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 December 2018

It melted the black stone Even its black shadow..Very fine poem and it culminates in removing all that is black.. fear. very positive.. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 December 2018

Our family is frozen Like the black stone But we clung to heavens above And called all its angels To lift the burden That threatened The sanctity of our home.......well penned with great ideology. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 November 2018

This is my favorite poem! My great pleasure reading this magnificent piece of work time and again!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 August 2018

Today, the sun shines In its brightest And warmest It melted the black stone Even its black shadow..........at the end the fear is vanished. A beautiful poem so nicely executed for which I made second visit.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 August 2018

Today, the sun shines In its brightest And warmest It melted the black stone Even its black shadow. A wonderful positive end of the poem.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2018

A highly imaginative poem on fear having touching expression. I find here the positivity. Nice work.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 June 2018

I absolutely agree with my friend Robert! It's a beautiful poem! My pleasure reading it time and again!

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Robert Murray Smith 10 May 2018

Positivity ousts fearful feelings.+++10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 December 2018

That is very true, Robert. Thank you for your great comment.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 April 2018

A piece of work that echoes a lot of optimistic spirit! I find a great confidence when read these kind of poems! A beautiful piece of work Rose! I take immense pleasure in visiting this poem!

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A wonderful comment, Dr.Dillip. Thank you.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 April 2018

With a gun of self confidence, Rose Marie Juan Austin conquers the dark land of fears Look at her she is smiling, she puts the lights on, in her eyes I do not see tears.

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A very heartwarming and highly motivational comment, Akhtar. Loved it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 March 2018

Our family is frozen/Like the black stone/But we clung to heavens above..very optimistic expression! I find a great skill in you in poetry writing! As a fan, I find pleasure reading your poems very often! God ahead writing beautiful poems! Stay always blessed!

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Thank you, Dr. Dillip.I feel honored and humbled by your wonderful message.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2018

The compactness of this beautiful poem inspires me a lot! .....We poured all our energy/Solidified our courage The conglomeration of/Family's strength/Produced the hardest/And strongest rock.............well penned Rose.........(10)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2018

This comment meant a lot to me, Dr. Dillip.Very much appreciated.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 December 2017

To lift the burden! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 December 2017

Thank you for your time in reading the poem. Your comment is much appreciated.

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