Wednesday, March 11, 2015

Connection Comments

Rating: 4.1

You stay a miles away but I feel you are so near
Like those of the twinkling stars wishing good night
in my ears
You walk down the stairs in a secret silence
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Nishi Kumari
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Rahman Henry 15 October 2015

Distance never matters. Well penned feelings. Lovely poem.

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Nishi Kumari 22 November 2015

thank you so much :)

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Nishi Kumari 12 June 2016

Yes I agree with you completely.... thanks for reading

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 September 2015

You borrow some smiles from those sunflowers in the daylight They fall on my lips every morning like the fresh dew drops on the leaves- - beautiful expressions of love. let it come through. let your wishes be fulfilled.. that is my p rayer for you.

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Nishi Kumari 05 September 2015

thanks a lot...

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Hannington Mumo 08 June 2015

True, love knows no boundary, no barrier...10/10.

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Nishi Kumari 21 June 2015

Well that means something...getting 10/10...thank you...

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Saadat Tahir 19 April 2015

nice feely and heartfelt lines an expression of ones heart beat! liked

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Nishi Kumari 21 June 2015

thank you Saadat...hope you liked it...

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Kim Barney 05 April 2015

Very nice. I enjoyed reading this. I especially liked TWINKLING STARS WISHING GOOD NIGHT IN MY EARS as if you could actually hear the stars. I have a similar line in my poem DO SOMETHING DIFFERENT.

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Nishi Kumari 21 June 2015

thanks Kim for your appreciation

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Nishi Kumari 21 June 2015

thank you kim for your comments...god bless you...

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Muhammad Farhan Ahmed 14 March 2015

This is such a heartfelt write with excellent, vivid imagery! The metaphors and similes are the main embellishment of this write. You are true. Love is the same everywhere. And distances grow the bond of love even more. This is an outstanding piece, but I just noticed a slight spelling mistake. It is 'shining' not 'shinning', a single 'n' comes.

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Nishi Kumari 15 March 2015

thanks Farhan for your appreciation and correction too...

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Muhammad Farhan Ahmed 14 March 2015

This is such a heartfelt write with excellent, vivid imagery! The metaphors and similes are the main embellishment of this write. You are true. Love is the same everywhere. And distances grow the bond of love even more. This is an outstanding piece, but I just noticed a slight spelling mistake. It is 'shining' not 'shinning', a single 'n' comes.

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