You stay a miles away but I feel you are so near
Like those of the twinkling stars wishing good night
in my ears
You walk down the stairs in a secret silence
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You borrow some smiles from those sunflowers in the daylight They fall on my lips every morning like the fresh dew drops on the leaves- - beautiful expressions of love. let it come through. let your wishes be fulfilled.. that is my p rayer for you.
nice feely and heartfelt lines an expression of ones heart beat! liked
Very nice. I enjoyed reading this. I especially liked TWINKLING STARS WISHING GOOD NIGHT IN MY EARS as if you could actually hear the stars. I have a similar line in my poem DO SOMETHING DIFFERENT.
This is such a heartfelt write with excellent, vivid imagery! The metaphors and similes are the main embellishment of this write. You are true. Love is the same everywhere. And distances grow the bond of love even more. This is an outstanding piece, but I just noticed a slight spelling mistake. It is 'shining' not 'shinning', a single 'n' comes.
This is such a heartfelt write with excellent, vivid imagery! The metaphors and similes are the main embellishment of this write. You are true. Love is the same everywhere. And distances grow the bond of love even more. This is an outstanding piece, but I just noticed a slight spelling mistake. It is 'shining' not 'shinning', a single 'n' comes.
Distance never matters. Well penned feelings. Lovely poem.
thank you so much :)
Yes I agree with you completely.... thanks for reading