-Who am I?
...A name?
...A piece of paper?
...The pigment of my skin?
...
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The most difficult thing in life. Finding Oneself! Excellent poem, has a great winding flow about it. Very original
I agree with Dr Subhendu Kar. Some nice introspective thoughts and imgery.
.The pigment of my skin? .. Forms on my bones? ...................wonderful write by metaphors Who am I ' is when textured in matrix of different roles of relationship, i do admire the way you depict the text,10++++
Connection is like an ode to acceptance. A deep emotion well expressed in this poem
you are my friend a member of my PH family.i hope you will not ask me again, who am i.
if not lost thing than I'm the memory of many. good thought.
I really enjoyed this poem. it is very well written and expressed. It reminds me of a poem I have written called Reflections take a look when you have time. We all have to take a good look at ourselves sometimes. We are somebody and we are beautifully and wonderfully made. A unique creation you are Elena.
Like a mirror we are playing many roles just when we face our characters to different people..and in this big connection the invisible string tied us all together from heart to hearts with love and care signals..._Soul
the question is so simple but find the answer is very hard brilliant writted
Don't you dare the delete the word. It is genius and genius like this poem must be around long enough to be loved and appreciated in its totality. Don't change a thing.
Hahaha thank you for asking: that was a playful time, I was trying to find out how could I write the sound of rewind. I was not quite happy with the choice but as any game played alone, eventually will have its time of bore. I could delete that word, not convinced yet I will think about.
You are a sweet memory of many. But, rewind: crfdjchdrchrfdsj What is that?
{Who am I? Celestial dust the oceans nano part. Tears. Smiles. Peace. Joy. Sadness.... If not lost thing, than I'm the memory of many. } We are soo much it's hard to describe, yet you did a beautiful job at it. Much enjoyed! 🌵