Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Connection Comments

Rating: 4.7

-Who am I?
...A name?
...A piece of paper?
...The pigment of my skin?
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Luz Hanaii 18 May 2019

{Who am I? Celestial dust the oceans nano part. Tears. Smiles. Peace. Joy. Sadness.... If not lost thing, than I'm the memory of many. } We are soo much it's hard to describe, yet you did a beautiful job at it. Much enjoyed! 🌵

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Sandra Feldman 17 September 2014

The most difficult thing in life. Finding Oneself! Excellent poem, has a great winding flow about it. Very original

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Danny Draper 15 September 2013

I agree with Dr Subhendu Kar. Some nice introspective thoughts and imgery.

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Hans Vr 01 September 2013

Hey, Elena, this is great work Superb reflection

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 August 2013

.The pigment of my skin? .. Forms on my bones? ...................wonderful write by metaphors Who am I ' is when textured in matrix of different roles of relationship, i do admire the way you depict the text,10++++

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Louis Cecile 24 August 2013

Connection is like an ode to acceptance. A deep emotion well expressed in this poem

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Ramesh Rai 22 August 2013

you are my friend a member of my PH family.i hope you will not ask me again, who am i.

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

if not lost thing than I'm the memory of many. good thought.

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Patricia Grantham 19 August 2013

I really enjoyed this poem. it is very well written and expressed. It reminds me of a poem I have written called Reflections take a look when you have time. We all have to take a good look at ourselves sometimes. We are somebody and we are beautifully and wonderfully made. A unique creation you are Elena.

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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2013

Like a mirror we are playing many roles just when we face our characters to different people..and in this big connection the invisible string tied us all together from heart to hearts with love and care signals..._Soul

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 15 August 2013

the question is so simple but find the answer is very hard brilliant writted

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Patti Masterman 14 August 2013

Your writing is so real. I hope you never change this one.

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Elena Plotkin 14 August 2013

Don't you dare the delete the word. It is genius and genius like this poem must be around long enough to be loved and appreciated in its totality. Don't change a thing.

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Elena Sandu 14 August 2013

Hahaha thank you for asking: that was a playful time, I was trying to find out how could I write the sound of rewind. I was not quite happy with the choice but as any game played alone, eventually will have its time of bore. I could delete that word, not convinced yet I will think about.

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Khairul Ahsan 14 August 2013

You are a sweet memory of many. But, rewind: crfdjchdrchrfdsj What is that?

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