Tuesday, February 20, 2007

Connecting With Corey Comments

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How I long to remove the rage
That’s etched upon his boyish brow
Unclench the fists so tight and tense
And smooth the lips shaped in a scowl
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Linda Coker
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Chuck Audette 23 February 2007

The depth of this shines through, and the rhyme (rather than free verse) keeps it light, and shows that he has found a home where love and laughter likely abound. -chuck

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Esther Leclerc 21 February 2007

This is a very sensitive, caring write, Linda. I can't imagine what it means to live this way, to never belong. I hope you do connect. If caring is all it takes, you're there.

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