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DAMN! once again very creative i love ya train of thought how you focus on one subject and twist it around into a real life situation that somebody else can understand.. it has so many meanings to it...i love the poem.. -J.K (new poems posted)

i love the wording in this one. then again im a sucker for a good rhyme scheme

nice flow. this is a great start.. i cant wait to read more.