Tuesday, May 15, 2018

Conjuring Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Are we all condemned or chained to the thoughts in our mind?
Which are at the expense of time.

How many minutes have you spent like Gatsby?
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Safiyyah Manjra
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Rajnish Manga 15 May 2018

An amazing reflection on man's status-quoits approach to life. The treatment given to the subject has philosophical undertones. Thank you, Safiyyah.

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Safiyyah Manjra 17 May 2018

I was trying for the philosophical undertones, i have been told i sound a bit philosophical with my words sometimes. It is something new I'm trying to strengthen or make more prominent.

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Robert Murray Smith 15 May 2018

Dear Safiyyah, a thought provoking poem on the fun side of life. I think, yes, only I, the mind is in perpertual motion. Not aware of chewing up time as it rolls along.++++10 Robert

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Safiyyah Manjra 17 May 2018

I agree with your comment this time! Yes sometimes we can be very unaware of our time spent.

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