Sunday, December 7, 2014

Conjugal Life (Ghazal) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life that is past in love is life, nothing is rest,
It's good it's better no doubt is the best.
Two birds ignorant what happens in the world,
Satisfied, content and happy in the nest!
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Rajnish Manga 29 September 2016

Imitation is a teacher with mighty manifest. Extremely lovable poem in Ghazal form which is not that easy to compose and not that easy to find in English. The poet has retained the beauty of the form along with that of the subject.

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Sonali Ganguly 01 May 2016

wow..... beautiful imagery

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M Asim Nehal 03 October 2015

Superb imagery with superfine lines..........Stand out para: I am sure in the gardens of high skies, In flowers of diamonds and pearls is a nest, Where birds incubate there golden eggs, Fairies are in fact an outcome of the crest.

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Khalid Saifullah 04 March 2015

a beautiful poem..................10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 December 2014

Your all the Ghazals are the best and nicely woven so as to form a fabric of joy and peace while being with them... 10/10

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